From 2aed68de1eeee67ae81de74831af4d6c7c5d3268 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: manuelk Date: Wed, 7 Jan 2015 10:52:08 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos in ReST docs --- documentation/intro.rst | 2 +- documentation/release_notes.rst | 10 +++++----- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/documentation/intro.rst b/documentation/intro.rst index ef58969f..330f2a42 100644 --- a/documentation/intro.rst +++ b/documentation/intro.rst @@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ Heritage This is the fifth-generation subdiv library in use by Pixar's proprietary animation system in a lineage that started with code written by Tony DeRose and Tien Truong -for Geri\u2019s Game in 1996. Each generation has been a from-scratch rewrite that +for Geri's Game in 1996. Each generation has been a from-scratch rewrite that has built upon our experience using subdivision surfaces to make animated films. This code is live, so Pixar's changes to OpenSubdiv for current and future films will be released as open source at the same time they are rolled out to Pixar diff --git a/documentation/release_notes.rst b/documentation/release_notes.rst index 70e42397..4bf4972e 100644 --- a/documentation/release_notes.rst +++ b/documentation/release_notes.rst @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Release 3.0 OpenSubdiv 3.0 represents a landmark release, with very profound changes to the core algorithms. While providing faster, more efficient, and more flexible subdivision code remains our principal goal, OpenSubdiv 3.0 introduces many -improvements that constitute a fairly radical departures from our previous +improvements that constitute a fairly radical departure from our previous versions. ---- @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ was both redundant and inefficient. OpenSubdiv 3.0 introduces a new *intermediate* topological representation, named **Vtr** (Vectorized Topology Representation). The topological relationships -held by Vtr can populated using either a high-level interface where simplicity +held by Vtr can be populated using either a high-level interface where simplicity has been emphasized, or a lower-level interface for enhanced efficiency. Vtr is much more efficient for the kinds of topological analysis required by Far and additionally is more flexible in that it supports the specification of @@ -141,13 +141,13 @@ Introducing Stencil Tables OpenSubdiv 3.0 replaces the serialized subdivision tables with factorized stencil tables. Subdivision tables as implemented in 2.x releases still contain a fairly large amount of data inter-dependencies, which incur penalties from -fences or force addition kernel launches. Most of these dependencies have now +fences or force additional kernel launches. Most of these dependencies have now been factorized away in the pre-computation stage, yielding *stencil tables* instead. Stencils remove all data dependencies and simplify all the computations into a single trivial kernel. This simplification results in a faster pre-computation -stage, faster execution on GPU, and fewer driver overheads. The new stencil +stage, faster execution on GPU, with fewer driver overheads. The new stencil tables Compute back-end is supported on all the same platforms as previous releases (except GCD). @@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ adopters to start building upon these releases. Within 'Master' releases, we expect APIs to be backward compatible so that existing client code can seamlessly build against newer releases. Changes -may include bug fixes as well as new features, +may include bug fixes as well as new features. .. container:: notebox